In one of my prior comments, I mentioned the other series I'd been working on and that I might publish excerpts from them. A reader asked when some of those excerpts might be forthcoming, so here's one from an urban fantasy I've been drafting (working title: The Seventh Shade). As with my other excerpts, the usual caveats still apply (ie, this isn't fully fleshed out, hasn't been proofed, etc.):
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The house suddenly trilled, letting out a noise that most would
interpret as some kind of creak or groan. It had recognized me, and I
interpreted the sound it made as one of almost extreme bliss. Like everyone
else, the house had probably assumed that I was long dead (or gone forever).
I smiled as Lucia
and I walked up to the front steps, then laid a hand on the wall next to the
front door.
“Yes, I’m
alive,” I said, grinning. “And it’s great to be back.”
The house
trilled again in excitement.
Simply put, the
house was a vivo domus, a living
domicile. There were other houses that were alive, but most of them were either
cursed, haunted, or demonically possessed. In one manner or another, the bulk
of them were sinister and wicked. My family’s manse was the only one I’d ever
heard of that was benevolent.
I reached for
the doorknob, only to have the house creak ominously as I touched it,
indicating that there was danger inside.
I glanced back
towards the various campfires. From the tracks on the ground, there had been scores
of werewolves here last night. There could be dozens on the other side of the
door.
Doesn’t matter, I decided. Even if there
were a hundred lycanthropes inside, I didn’t have to fight them all. I only had to beat one: the alpha. With that
thought, I opened the door and stepped inside, with Lucia right on my heels..
We found
ourselves in the foyer. As I closed the door behind us, the first thing I
noticed was the smell. Here, in an enclosed environment, the stench of urine –
and other pungent odors – was much stronger than outside. As before, Lucia
announced her displeasure with an audible hiss.
I took a moment
to get my bearings. Needless to say, the layout of the place really hadn’t
changed. However, the interior of the house had suffered abuse that matched or
exceeded the neglect I’d seen outside. Furniture and chairs lay upended or
smashed, stair railings had been ripped off, the carpet in a nearby room was
soiled beyond repair, and there was trash everywhere. In short, the place
looked like a dump.
Not even the
house itself had escaped damage, as chunks of plaster had been gouged out of
the walls in various places – most notably in the form of three parallel lines
that I recognized as claw marks. Seeing my home marred like this angered me far
more than anything else I’d seen. Catching the sound of voices coming from the
living room, I marched intently in that direction, smoldering with rage.
There were
seven of them in the room when I entered – six males and one female. They were in human form but completely naked,
as werewolves tend to do when left to their own devices. One was in a corner, urinating;
the others were on their haunches in a circle, heads and hands jerking in an
odd fashion such that it took me a moment to realize what was happening: they were
feeding. None of them immediately took note of my presence.
There was a three-legged
stool lying on its side near my feet. I
picked it up and then angrily flung it at the fellow pissing in my living room. It struck him
on the calf of his left leg, sweeping the limb out from under him. Off-balance,
he toppled over backwards, arms flailing. His head hit the floor with an
audible thunk, like a coconut falling onto a concrete sidewalk. He lay there
and didn’t move.
The sound of
their companion hitting the floor brought all the other werewolves to their
feet. They glanced at their friend, and then – finally noticing me – turned in
my direction.
“Get out of my
house,” I said firmly.
There was
silence for a moment as a couple of the lycanthropes exchanged glances.
“Wh-what?”
asked the female, a gorgeous but wild-haired blonde, after a few seconds.
“This is my
place,” I stressed. “My home. You don’t belong here. Get out.”
As I was
speaking, I had noticed the nostrils of several of the werewolves flare. I
smiled internally, understanding that they must be confused. Looking at me,
they likely saw someone they thought was human, but my scent probably befuddled
them. Back in the nether realms, seems like there was always something chasing
you in order to eat you, enslave you, sacrifice you, or worse. You learn to
camouflage your smell. Thus, the group in front of me probably wasn’t sure what
to make of me. Then Lucia hissed and momentarily drew their attention.
The largest of
the group – a big guy about six-six in height and built like a weightlifter – suddenly
shifted his gaze back to me and smiled. He had obviously picked up my companion’s
scent and assumed her smell was masking my own (which wasn’t too far from the
truth).
“Listen,” said
the big guy, whom I pegged as the alpha, “I don’t know who you are, but this
place belongs to us. Now normally, you’d get ripped to shreds walking into the
wolf’s den, but I’m still feeling buzzed from our party last night. Plus, I
think it’s entertaining that you knocked Nick” – he gestured towards the
unconscious fellow – “on his ass, so I’m going to give you a chance. Turn
around and leave, then run as fast as you can. And maybe, just maybe, you can
get away before we catch you.”
The big fellow’s
companions snickered, and I could see in their eyes how elated they were at the
thought of hunting fresh prey.
“I’m not going
to be run out of my own house,” I stated.
The alpha
laughed. “Your house? Dude, we’ve
lived here for fucking years and had full run of the place. Marked it as our
territory. Carved our names in the floorboards. Taken dumps in the hallway. Does it sound like this place belongs to
anybody else?”
Completely
livid, I clenched my fists. “You need to leave. Now.”
The alpha
grunted I exasperation. “Man, you are really fucking up my mood, and I’m trying
to be a nice guy here – give you a chance.”
“To hell with
that,” said the blonde. “Fuck him up, Bone.”
“Yeah,” chimed
in one of the other werewolves. “Tear him to pieces.” The rest of their friends
murmured in agreement.
“Don’t try it,
Bone,” I advised as I saw the alpha debating. “It’s piss-poor advice.”
Bone stepped
towards me, but put a hand out when his companions attempted to follow, effectively
telling them to stay back.
“I’ve got this,”
he said over his shoulder, then turned to me. “Man, I don’t know if you’re
drunk, or addled, or just plain stupid, but a minute from now when I’m ripping
your arm out of its socket, you’ll be wishing you’d run when you had the chance.”
A moment later
he arched his back, and a weird popping noise began to reverberate in the room.
I recognized the sound as bones and tissue realigning themselves, sinew and
muscle being reconfigured as Bone began to morph into his wolf form.
I quickly muttered
a hex under my breath as hair began to sprout from his body. A moment later,
Bone’s metamorphosis seemed to grind to a halt, but well before he had fully
transformed. The result was something that was a little difficult to take in
with a single glance.
Bone’s back was
now large and hunched, full of muscle and obviously heavy. His hands had
expanded in size, becoming hefty but lacking any claws. One of his legs had
become digitigrade, the ankle extending up like that of a canine until it gave
the appearance of a backwards knee; the other had just been starting to
transform, but was still identifiably human for the most part. On his face, his
mouth and nose had just begun extending into a muzzle. However, the lower jaw
was noticeably longer than the upper, and his teeth had not fully reshaped into
canines.
All in all, he
looked like the failed genetic experiment of a mad scientist.
Bone let out a
groan of confusion. “Wha rih ru ru ru rhee?”
His eyes went
big as saucers and he put a hand up to his throat as he realized that the words
coming from his malformed mouth were barely recognizable.
I smiled,
noting that he was asking, What did you
do to me?
Basically, I had used a spell to slow down his metamorphosis (but I wasn’t telling him that). He was still transforming,
but at a much slower rate that what was normal. More to the point, in his
current state, he really wasn’t designed for combat – a fact that I took full
advantage of.
With one
wolfhound leg and one that was still pretty much human, Bone lacked balance to
a large extent. Planting
my left foot, I then lashed out with my right, kicking him solidly on the side
of his human knee. The leg buckled, and he went
down, yelping in pain.
Bone
instinctively reached out his hands to catch himself as he fell. He did an
adequate job of it, but a second after he hit the floor, I stomped down hard on
the forearm of one of his outstretched hands.
I was rewarded with the sound of bone cracking and my adversary howling,
then pulling the arm in and cradling it to his body.
I detached the
tendril from my hip and extended the weapon, making it long like a staff. I then
swung it forcefully at Bone’s side, like a golfer trying to drive a ball three
hundred yards. He
didn’t go that far, but he did end up flying across the room, smacking against a wall and then
dropping down to the floor.
Still furious,
I marched towards him, the tendril now glowing in my hand with a crimson light.
The other werewolves, recognizing that they were out of their depth, maintained their human forms and stepped lithely out of my way. (They'd obviously seen what I'd done to their leader when he tried to "wolf out," and none of them seemed eager to experience it firsthand.) When I reached Bone, I raised the tendril over
my head, ready to cave his skull in. Whining in distress like an injured pup,
the alpha raised his good hand in supplication, basically asking for mercy. As
he did so, I saw white bone sticking out of his side, and I realized my last
swing with the tendril had broken some ribs.
I hesitated,
unsure of what to do. I was already in a bad mood, and these werewolves had
pissed me off further with the mistreatment of family home. Moreover, they
probably would have killed me if given the chance. However, it just didn’t feel right to
continue beating the stuffing out of this guy when he was clearly out of the
fight.
I lowered the
hand holding the tendril, but still held it threateningly. “For the last time, I’m telling you: get out of my house.”
The other
werewolves, seeing an opportunity, rushed to their fallen leader and began helping
him up while I took a few steps back. Once on his feet, Bone coughed once,
spitting up blood. He really was in bad shape. Still, he gave me a steady look
and then nodded, indicating that he understood what I’d said. His people then
began helping him to the door.
“One more
thing,” I said, causing the group to stop and look at me as a whole. “Don’t get
any cute ideas about coming back here and getting revenge. If I see any of you
around, if you piss within a mile of this house, if you so much as howl at the moon in a
canyon and the echo reaches me, I’m going to decorate this whole fucking place with wolf pelts. Understand?”
Still looking
at me, Bone nodded again. A moment later, his people resumed shuffling him towards
the door. A short time later, I was alone in the house.
I have to say it pique my interest. Not enough info to know what is about but what we got was really fun.
ReplyDeleteI like the concept of the house and the MC affecting the transformation. From my understanding that takes some serious mojo.
Can't wait to see more of this. But I have a feeling it will be up there with Fringe worlds and KS for me.
Glad it got your interest. I have a number of series that I simply haven't been able to put the requisite time into. (Right now, I'm focused on finishing KS#6.) If/When I leave the day job, I'm hoping to geta book out at least every two months - sooner, if I can help it.
DeleteWow dark I think I like it.
ReplyDeleteThanks, glad to hear it.
DeleteMe Likey!!😊😊😊
ReplyDeleteLOL! Thanks.
DeleteI think I get why you'd want to Wright this under a pen name it has a lot darker tone than most of what else I've read from you.
ReplyDeleteExactly. It's not completely in stride with what I'd describe as the brand I've established thus far, and I wouldn't want readers to be turned off because it's far different than what they expected. No one wants to crack open a Coke and have it taste like Sunkist (even if you like Sunkist).
DeleteI can't wait to read the rest of this novel. I have to admit you've really made me a fan of your writing since I first read your kid sensation novels
ReplyDeleteThanks, I consider that high praise. I've actually got about a dozen SF/Fantasy series in mind, but I leaning towards rewarding readers for their patience by focusing on Kid Sensation for a while.
DeleteI'm looking forward to the new series ,got to say warden was not my cup of tea but I love kid sensation and I think I'm going to love this book series to.
ReplyDeleteI appreciate your honesty, and I'm grateful to you for giving Warden a shot. I'm glad you like the excerpt, and hopefully when the book is released you will indeed love it.
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